Monday, November 21, 2016

report/arterfact bolg

Last term I was learning about the Trojan war. I had to research to find information and use keywords then write it in my own words.  I also had to create a clay model and mine was the Trojan horse. Something that challenged me was finding the info for my report and writing it in my own words.
 Have you ever wondered about the Trojan war and how it started? Well that is what my report tells you.
 I have also made an artifact of the inside of the Trojan city with the Trojan horse. I have stretched my perseverance muscle because I kept remaking my gate and horse because it kept breaking.
                                                                         

Friday, August 19, 2016

Athlete writing blog



I have been learning find out information about my athlete Ryan Taylor. Something that challenged me was to use key words to write informartion in my own words. I found out it is illegal to copy someones elses work so I had to restart some information. I stretched my revising muscle by going back and making changes.

Monday, June 27, 2016

Maths blog post

 
I am proud of my maths task because I worked really hard on it to make it my personal best.
What  learnt was to to find different ways to make more multiplication like 4 groups of 15 = 50.  Something that challenged  me was to figure out the maths questions like 4 groups of 7.



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Thursday, June 16, 2016

matariki


   Matariki

Totara hub has been learning about Matariki and the seven sisters. I learnt that the seven sisters have special things about them, and that Waifi and Wasita are sisters. We also did little workshops like how to build roses out of flax and painting on rocks. I was in the rose making and then the stones. It was really fun making the flowers even if it was really tricky, well not for Alex, he got perfect on his own. I found it really tricky so I had help from Miss Jackett.

How to make a putiputi



albotross reading task

WALT summarise. Summarising helps us to understand ideas in a text.

When we are summarising we use key words and phrases toretell the main points of a text.

Summarise what this story is about using five sentences. In each sentence use one of the key words;
Pine forest, magpie, rescue, splint, pet.
Splinters is a story about a magpie called Splinter.
Splinter likes to fly in the pine forests.
Splinter broke his leg so he needed a splint to help his leg stay strait.
Splinter was rescued by a boy named Edward.
Edward decided to keep Splinters as a pet.

I have been learning to summaries story with five sentences. I am proud of my reading task because I worked hard on it and because its my personal best.

Summaries what this story is about using five sentences. In each sentence use one of the key words;
Pine forest, magpie, rescue, splint, pet.
Splinters is a story about a magpie called Splinter.
Splinter likes to fly in the pine forests.
Splinter broke his leg so he needed a splint to help his leg stay strait.
Splinter was rescued by a boy named Edward.
Edward decided to keep Splinters as a pet.

Tuesday, June 14, 2016

Science blog post



WALT write instructions for the reader to follow

Procedural writing


Introduction: have you ever tried to grow your own disgusting mould?  Be Careful tho (though) some mold is toxic and some good moulds need certain things to grow so it's like a plant. To grow mould its needs to be a fair experiment or it won't be science. If you want to make your own revolting mould then read on

Equipment for testing air


  1. 3  zip lock bags
  2. 3 labels
  3. 3 pieces of fruit (the same)
  4. A tooth pick
  5. A sharpie

Steps
  1. Put one of the fruits in a ziplock bag and close it
  2. Poke 10  holes in the bag with a toothpick
  3. Then label it air some
  4. Put the 2nd fruit the 2nd ziplock bag.
  5. Push all the air out of the bag and then shut it.
  6. Then label it air none
  7. Put the last fruit in the last bag and keep it open
  8. Then label it air lots
  9. Then put them in a safe place like on a table
  10. Last make since that say do not touch or smell stay away.
What was challenging was to get the equipment ready and putting the experiment together. I am proud of my experiment because me and my group worked really hard on the experiment to make it a fair test. A fair test is where you only change one thing.


Monday, May 16, 2016

I am poem blog post

I am…
Success Criteria
Use a thesaurus to choose the best vocabulary
Choose the best nouns for the poem
Choose the best adjectives to describe some nouns t
Leave the reader thinking about your poem by sharing what it inside you


I am a skater
I wonder how gas turns into plasma when heated up.
I hear my cat meowing with her mouth when she wants me to feed her food.
I see cars zooming past me from the bedroom  window.
I want to be Tony Hawk 2.
I am a skater
I pretend to do tricks on a skateboard
I feel the grip tape on my feet.
I touch the bush that goes past me in the garden.
I worry that I'll skate into someone
I cry when I fall off my skateboard
I am a skater
I understand how to do an ollie on my skate board.
I say that I can do an ollie.
I dream of being a pro skater.
I try to do an ollie.
I hope I will do an ollie.
I am a skater
I am proud of my I am poem because It really tells the about me and what I like. What I learnt was how to write good poems. Here is the example that helped me. What explained me in my poem was how much I liked skateboarding and I put detail in there by telling the reader who I am and what I think and believe.

Model

I am a thinker, I am different

I wonder if people believe in themselves?

I hear the sparkle kind people bring to the world

I see animals teaching us each hour

I want to fix but sometimes I can’t

I am a thinker, I am different

I pretend to be a fairy twinkling about

I feel so content when people flourish

I touch silky fur and smile
I worry what others might think
I cry when people are distressed
I am a thinker, I am different
I understand that we are stars always ready to twinkle
I say what I believe (sometimes)
I dream of unicorns, mermaids and pixies
I try to make a difference
I hope that most days I do
I am a thinker, I am different


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