I am poem blog post

I am…

Success Criteria

Use a thesaurus to choose the best vocabulary

Choose the best nouns for the poem

Choose the best adjectives to describe some nouns t
Leave the reader thinking about your poem by sharing what it inside you

I am a skater

I wonder how gas turns into plasma when heated up.

I hear my cat meowing with her mouth when she wants me to feed her food.

I see cars zooming past me from the bedroom  window.

I want to be Tony Hawk 2.

I am a skater

I pretend to do tricks on a skateboard

I feel the grip tape on my feet.

I touch the bush that goes past me in the garden.

I worry that I'll skate into someone

I cry when I fall off my skateboard

I am a skater

I understand how to do an ollie on my skate board.

I say that I can do an ollie.

I dream of being a pro skater.

I try to do an ollie.

I hope I will do an ollie.

I am a skater
I am proud of my I am poem because It really tells the about me and what I like. What I learnt was how to write good poems. Here is the example that helped me. What explained me in my poem was how much I liked skateboarding and I put detail in there by telling the reader who I am and what I think and believe.
Model

I am a thinker, I am different

I wonder if people believe in themselves?

I hear the sparkle kind people bring to the world

I see animals teaching us each hour

I want to fix but sometimes I can’t

I am a thinker, I am different

I pretend to be a fairy twinkling about

I feel so content when people flourish

I touch silky fur and smile

I worry what others might think

I cry when people are distressed

I am a thinker, I am different

I understand that we are stars always ready to twinkle

I say what I believe (sometimes)

I dream of unicorns, mermaids and pixies

I try to make a difference

I hope that most days I do

I am a thinker, I am different

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